1- NUMERIC BIRTH MONTH 10 - 9- 96 INSTEAD OF SPELLED OUT October 9, 1996 INDICATES A TRUE, EARLY GENERATION

2 - TOO MUCH SPACE BETWEEN BIRTHDAY NUMBERS 

3 - NO COMMA BETWEEN "OAKBROOK" AND "IL" ON HANG TAG

4 - A COMMA AFTER "IL" INSTEAD OF A PERIOD ON TUSH TAG

5 - 3 EXCLAMATION POINTS (!!!) AT THE END OF "PAGE" ON SWING TAG 

6  NAME AND STYLE NUMBER ARE ON THE SAME LINE

7  NO APOSTROPHE IN IT'S ON LAST LINE OF POEM